the maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville. summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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The pictures illustrate the changes that have taken place in the town named Kimsville since

year

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the year

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2002 until today.

Overall

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, it appears that the city has

exprianced

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experienced

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apply

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modernization during the mentioned period and some facilities

has

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have

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been built. If we look at

north-western

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the north-western

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part of the map, the construction of

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apply

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new apartments has made the

erea

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area

comftable

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comfortable

for living

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to live

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, another

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in, another

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noticable

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noticeable

notable

change that has taken place is

building

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the building

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of a

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new train station on the west side which makes it easier for people to transport. Some other striking changes are on the bottom of the map, there were some trees on the left side which were cut down and a new football stadium has been constructed, another

intresting

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interesting

change

has been

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the replacement of a pub

instead

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of the old cinema which has improved the

lesuire

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leisure

facilities in the town. And the final change that can be seen is that

new

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a new

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software company has been replaced

insead

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instead

of the factory which was there

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2002.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 5 times.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

167 words

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the maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville. summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

An organization has given an advertisement for a part-time job for local children. Write a letter to the administrator of the organization. In your letter Introduce yourself Why you think you are suitable for the job State when you will be able to join that job

Some people feel that boarding schools are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building the live in. What are the reason for this? How can people research this?