The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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A glance at the graphs provided reveals the total proportion of released films and the total rate of

tickets

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sold during one decade from 1996 and 2006 in a country.

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, one particularly interesting fact highlighted by the figure is that by far the highest ratio of ticket sales belonged to comedy in 2006 and

also

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that of films released was related to drama in 1996. In stark contrast, the lowest portion of

tickets

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sold was related to

romance

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in 2006 and that of released films belonged to

romance

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in 2006.

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what is shown, the percentage of movies produced in drama, comedy and fantasy increased from 1995 to 2006.

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, the ratio of movies produced in

romance

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did not change during one decade from 1996 to 2006.

Additionally

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, the ratio of

tickets

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bought enhanced in comedy, drama and fantasy from 1996 to 2006.

In contrast

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, the proportion of

tickets

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bought in

romance

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declined from 1996 to 2006.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words tickets, romance with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

160 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

depict
significant increases/decreases
highlighting
drawing comparisons
discrepancies
notable trends
unexpected findings
anomalies
phenomenon
emphasizing
evolution
implications
producers
distributors
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