The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie chart and table given provide information on
transportation
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methods (car, LRT, Bus, and Taxi) and their purpose (commuting to work, shopping, Leisure activities, Taking children to school, and business).
Overall
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, Edmonton citizens chose cars as their most common means of
transportation
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,
while
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taxis and buses were among the least commonly used
vehicles
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.
Furthermore
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,
vehicles
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were used predominantly to commute to work by citizens of Edmonton,
while
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shopping and leisure activities were the least common causes of using their
vehicles
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. In terms of transit, cars and light rail transport were the most used means of
transportation
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(45% and 35% respectively).
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busses and taxis were among the least popular
vehicles
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, they both scored only 10%. Moving on, commuting to work was the predominant cause of using means of
transportation
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which scored 55%,
while
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shopping and leisure activities were among the rare causes and both recorded 15%. Business and taking children to school were chosen
similarly
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by people and they recorded 45% and 40% respectively
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words transportation, vehicles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • transportation modes
  • car ownership
  • proportion
  • sustainable
  • environmentally friendly
  • transportation habits
  • environmental awareness
  • government policies
  • public transport infrastructure
  • urban planning
  • congestion
  • environmental quality
  • future implications
  • adapt
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