The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2), emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal Between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the infomation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.
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The
line
graph gives information about how normal carbon dioxide ( CO2), emission per individual in European Use synonyms
cauntries
namely: The Correct your spelling
countries
UK
, Use synonyms
Seweden
, Italy and Portugal during the period from 1967 to 2007. The unite Correct your spelling
Sweden
maesure
by Correct your spelling
measure
measured
tonnes
.
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, the Linking Words
line
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the amount
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CO2
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foreign
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Europe
which
the highest number of emissions was The Correct your spelling
with
UK
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while
, the lowest Linking Words
rate
of CO2 was Portugal.
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of
Portugal and Italy Change preposition
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tonnes
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tonnes
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respectively
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in Italy during the Use synonyms
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rate
of emissions in Portugal Use synonyms
continue
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up around 5 Change the form of the verb
make
tonnes
until Use synonyms
1997s
. Correct your spelling
1997
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rate
had overtaken the Use synonyms
line
of Sweden in the year 2007 .
There was a significant decrease in The Use synonyms
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uk
in general trend , Correct your spelling
UK
moreover
the Linking Words
rate
of The Use synonyms
UK
rach to the Use synonyms
lowere
point in the Correct your spelling
lowest
last
period of the graph. On Linking Words
contrary
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the contrary
line
of Sweden rose sharply , Use synonyms
then
reduced gradually until the end of Linking Words
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