The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2), emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal Between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the infomation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.

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The
line
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graph gives information about how normal carbon dioxide ( CO2), emission per individual in European
cauntries
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countries
namely: The
UK
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,
Seweden
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Sweden
, Italy and Portugal during the period from 1967 to 2007. The unite
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measure
measured
by
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.
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, the
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illustrates
amount
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the amount
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of
Co2
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CO2
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in
foure
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foreign
countries in
European
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Europe
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which
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the highest number of emissions was The
UK
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while
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, the lowest
rate
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of CO2 was Portugal. Generally speaking, in 1967 the
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of
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Portugal and Italy
were
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apply
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a
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rise
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gradually to
reached
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reach
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2
tonnes
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and 6
tonnes
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perspectively
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there
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a
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stood at 6
tonnes
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in Italy during the
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1977 and 1987.
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however
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, the
rate
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of emissions in Portugal
continue
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continued
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to increase dramatically to
made
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up around 5
tonnes
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until
1997s
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1997
.
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the
rate
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had overtaken the
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of Sweden in the year 2007 . There was a significant decrease in The
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uk
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UK
in general trend ,
moreover
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the
rate
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of The
UK
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rach to the
lowere
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lowest
point in the
last
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period of the graph. On
contrary
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the
line
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of Sweden rose sharply ,
then
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reduced gradually until the end of
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the graph
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words line, uk, tonnes, rate with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • per capita emissions
  • fluctuate
  • decline
  • rise
  • trend
  • peak
  • notable
  • dramatic increase
  • steady decrease
  • comparatively
  • significant
  • marginal
  • consistently
  • plateau
  • surge
  • diminish
  • aggregate data
  • historical data
  • metric tons
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