The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it look now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
Overall
, the Linking Words
Library
has been changed in various ways over the years. Especially, all rooms face Use synonyms
with
that Change preposition
apply
changing
and become contemporary with their new way of purpose.
Replace the word
change
In
the east side of the Change preposition
On
Library
, there Use synonyms
were
only one Change the verb form
was
room
with a door, which Use synonyms
is
Children's Wrong verb form
was
books
, and Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
room
just become Use synonyms
Lecture
Correct article usage
a Lecture
room
. After that, below Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
room
there Use synonyms
were
a space Change the verb form
was
Correct pronoun usage
that included
included
enquiry desks with many Wrong verb form
including
usage
, Change to a plural noun
usages
hence
they Linking Words
builded
up some walls around Correct your spelling
built
this
Linking Words
area
and Use synonyms
turn
it Wrong verb form
turned
to
a Cafe. Change preposition
into
Beside
, the space between Replace the word
Besides
of
these they added some self-service machines and Change preposition
apply
information
desk. Correct article usage
an information
However
, Linking Words
this
Linking Words
area
had Use synonyms
an
adult non-fiction Correct article usage
apply
books
20 years ago but they turned it Use synonyms
to
Change preposition
into
a
adult fiction Correct article usage
apply
books
with a smaller Use synonyms
area
.
Use synonyms
In
the west side, there were two Change preposition
On
Use synonyms
room
, one of them involved with Fix the agreement mistake
rooms
the
CDs, computer games and videos, the other one was just a reading Correct article usage
apply
room
Use synonyms
that
pupils could read something from Correct word choice
where
Use synonyms
library
. Add an article
the library
Despite
, the reading Correct pronoun usage
Despite this
room
Use synonyms
altered
to a computer Add a missing verb
was altered
room
and they moved the door to Use synonyms
right
side of the Add an article
the right
room
. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the Linking Words
orther
Correct your spelling
other
room
Use synonyms
modified
Add a missing verb
was modified
to
Storytelling events including Children's fiction Change preposition
for
books
. Use synonyms
Although
, they added two new Linking Words
sofa
into that Change to a plural noun
sofas
room
. The gap between Use synonyms
these two
Change the determiner
this two room
these two rooms
room
changed into all reference Use synonyms
books
from adult fiction Use synonyms
books
. Use synonyms
Lastly
, tables and chairs, which are placed in Linking Words
middle
of the Add an article
the middle
library
, had been moved out from Use synonyms
Use synonyms
library
and they left that Add an article
the library
area
with empty space.Use synonyms
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room, books, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
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