The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make 

comparisons where relevant.
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The charts present of the proportion users' transportation between public and private in
Edmonton
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.
Overall
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, in
Edmonton
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, the Car is the most common transportation vehicle that people
use
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to help their mobility.
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, they often
use
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it to support their work to be more efficient.
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,
Edmonton
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people love to
use
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a car, as we can see in the diagram it has 45% following LRT ( Light Rail Transit) at 35% percentages.
Although
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,
Edmonton
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citizens
also
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use
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buses and taxis the amount is less than a car and LRT at 10% for each.
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, If we go deeply about what reason why people from
Edmonton
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mostly
use
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cars for daily transportation. The first reason is they need to optimalism time to going work at 55%. And
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, the second is business about 45%. Taking their children to school is the third place with 40%. and the fourth and the
last
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is for leisure and shopping at 15%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words edmonton, use with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • transportation modes
  • car ownership
  • proportion
  • sustainable
  • environmentally friendly
  • transportation habits
  • environmental awareness
  • government policies
  • public transport infrastructure
  • urban planning
  • congestion
  • environmental quality
  • future implications
  • adapt
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