The chart below shows the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparison where relevant.
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The given pie charts compare data about the percentage of reasons that the population use either bicycles or cars to go to work.
Overall
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, it is important that the people who ride a bike think about the cost, the environment and health
while
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another group believe that being cosy in all aspects is more crucial.
According to
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the diagrams, the main reason that the community utilize bicycles is healthy and fitness and less pollution which compose the same portion as 30%;
however
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, comfort with 40% reached the first reason of the driver.
Thereafter
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, the second cause of driving is the distance to work which constitutes 21%. The graphs demonstrate that driving faster than cycling and needing to carry things to work made up a similar fraction as just under 15%;
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safer than cycling forms 11%.
In contrast
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, no parking car, no cost, and faster than driving for cycling respectively report 15% 13% and 12%.
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