The diagram below shows the life cycle of the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture illustrates the various

process

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processes

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of evolution in the life cycle of the salmon

Overall

Linking Words

, the process

consist

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consists

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of main 7 stages,beginning with

layingeggs

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laying eggs

and ending up with adult salmon.The process is natural and

circle

Correct article usage

the circle

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First of all,Adult fish lay eggs in fresh water which

is

Unnecessary verb

apply

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hatch in about 3

month

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months

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.

Secondly

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, appear alevin who is needed to

feeds

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feed

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off yolk-seo for several weeks.

Following

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this

Linking Words

, fry

grow

Correct subject-verb agreement

grows

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between 5 to 10 weeks old and still not able to

swimming

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swim

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. In the next stage, fish

parr

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are

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several months old,

start

Correct word choice

and start

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growing fingers.

Then

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, smolt

grow

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grows

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,

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and on

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on

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in

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1-3 years he

leave

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leaves

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the sea and

adapt

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adapts

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on

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to

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other water. Adult fish after

spend

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spending

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1 to 8 years

at

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in

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the ocean

and

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apply

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become big and ready

allocate

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to allocate

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spawn.