The debate over whether schools should focus solely on academic
rather than include extracurricular lessons in their curriculum.
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that academic
are essential for future careers,
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believe practical
are equally
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for personal development. In my view, focusing on traditional
will
be benefitsChange the verb form
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more in
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position.
On the one hand, academic
are extremely vital nowadays since
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build a strong foundation for higher
and specialized
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, field
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medicine
requireChange the verb form
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a strong foundation of science, particularly biology.
, students with
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grasp of these
are better
to compete in the job
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.
, they can develop analytic and critical thinking
, which are applicable
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various
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of life.
, practical
are Change the verb form
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play an
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role because
necessary for personal independence
as cooking and basic repairs.
, a young adult
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can plan, shop
groceriesChange preposition
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, and cook healthy meals without relying on takeout.
, not all students
academic careers; practical
provide alternative job opportunities. Some people
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to study in vocational career which
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technical
.
In conclusion,
offer
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advantageFix the agreement mistake
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for intellectual and professional growth, practical
play a key role in individual
.
SchoolFix the agreement mistake
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should provide both of these
in the curriculum to prepare students for diverse challenges.