The graph shows children by age group as a percentage of the young population in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows children by age group as a percentage of the young population in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table chart provides key information about the kids' population in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2001 by age
group
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of youngsters. The units are measured in percentages.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that there was an
increasing
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and decrease for most groups during the period of 1990 to 2001.
In addition
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, the
group
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of 15-19 made a dramatic shrink in the first years,
whereas
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10-14 did not make any reduce during the whole period, which is the only
group
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that made it.
According to
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what is shown, the 0-4
group
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made a slight climb and
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in the years 1990 to 1995, before it made a consistent reduction from 26% to 23% from 1996 to 2001.
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, 5-9 increased by 1.5% from 1990 to 1997 to be at the highest rate ever before it hit a low of
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25%
at the end
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of the period. In terms of 10-14 and 15-19 were too much different in their attitudes, 10-14 is making a rapid growth from 23% and reached
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26.5% which is the biggest number in the graph.
However
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, 15-19 has made a significant reduction by 3% in small time from 1990 to 1994,
then
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it starts to grow
until
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to
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25%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words group with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduction" was used 2 times.
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