The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make 

comparisons where relevant.
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The charts below describe the
the
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reasons why people
use
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the
car
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in the city and the percentage of different types of transportation.
Overall
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, the most significant type of transportation used by most public in the city is the
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the LRT comes after and most of them
use
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the
car
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to go to work and on business trips
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take their children to school. First of all,the highest percentage is 45% which represents that most people
use
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the
car
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as their preferred way of transportation. There are a lot of reasons for using the
car
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in the city which is commuting to work
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reason is the highest with a percentage of 55 followed by business at 45%
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40% of them
use
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the
car
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to deliver their children to school.
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,There are 2 other reasons for using the
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but are slightly important which are shopping and leisure activities with 15% of each. Second , the pie chart illustrates that there are other transport ways used by the Edmonton community. The second highest
use
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is LRT with 35% ,
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, the bus and taxi utilised by 10 % and it seems that it is not preferred as shown in the diagram.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words use, car with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • transportation modes
  • car ownership
  • proportion
  • sustainable
  • environmentally friendly
  • transportation habits
  • environmental awareness
  • government policies
  • public transport infrastructure
  • urban planning
  • congestion
  • environmental quality
  • future implications
  • adapt
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