The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The maps illustrate the current state of
Norbiton
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the Norbiton
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industrial
area
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and its proposed future development plan.
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,the industrial
area
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is expected to grow substantially with many improvements and constructions,which include shops,a medical centre,
school
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a school
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,playground.the changes with
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include
replacement
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the replacement
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of factories with housing. As the first map reveals ,
Norbitton
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the Norbitton
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industrial
area
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is located east of the town,with a river on the northern side that
seperates
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separates
the farmland from the industrial
area
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,which is located in the centre of the map.The central part of the industrial
area
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contains a
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round about
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and two roads,these are surrounded by factories. In the future ,a bridge will be built across the river,which will provide access to the housing located in the farmland from the
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round about
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.
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,the factories around the
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round about
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are going to
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be demolised
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demolised
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demolished
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and replaced with housing.
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,more roads and a second smaller
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round about
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will be constructed on the bigger
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round about
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to access the new
buidings
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buildings
that have been planned for the
area
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,which are,a school and a playground on the eastern side of the bigger
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round about
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,shops and a medical centre to the southwest and southeast respectively.There will
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be more housing and a new road northwest of the bigger
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round about
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roundabout
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, round with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
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