You applied to a job and were offered the position, but have decided not to accept the offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor with whom you interviewed. In your letter: explain the reason why you are declining the offer describe your reasons for staying with your current position express your gratitude.

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Dear Mr. Smith I am writing
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letter via email to express my satisfaction
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our interview and gratitude
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your
favor
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due to
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your positive response, despite
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, I changed my plans to get
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new position and incline
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worthy offer from you.
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, after thinking and analysing all the conditions and details of the options of
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new opportunity
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very attractive and has many great
prospect
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for my future occupation but there are some barriers in front of me. One of the most
reason
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it has been so long time to get
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a valuable
experienc
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experience
in my current
jub
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job
and I do not want to lose
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investment. Changing the field of work requires
a great courage
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that I
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on it.
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I have many friends and co-workers
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accompanied me for twenty years to catch
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position and
cosequently
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consequently
, I do not want to
collapce
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collapse
all the bridges stated behind me.
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, by accepting the new
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job
my current salary and the whole income will lower very much which is very determinant in my family life.
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, I appreciate your
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effort and hope you forgive me for my negative response. Yours sincerely,
masoud
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Reyhani
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coherence cohesion
Consider breaking down paragraphs to separate distinct ideas, making it easier for the reader to follow your reasoning.
task achievement
Try to provide more specific details on why you wish to stay in your current position, such as specific aspects of your role you enjoy.
task achievement
The letter maintains a polite and formal tone, which is suitable for professional correspondence.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately used, contributing to a respectful and professional letter format.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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