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The line graphs show the percentage of household with electrical appliences from 1920 to 2019. SUMAMRIZE MAIN FEATURES AND MAKE COMPARISON WHERE RELAVENT.

The line graphs show the percentage of household with electrical appliences from 1920 to 2019. SUMAMRIZE MAIN FEATURES AND MAKE COMPARISON WHERE RELAVENT.
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The two given line graphs illustrate the percentage of houses with electrical appliances
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 and the number of
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 of housework per
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 from 1920 to 2019.
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, it is noticeable from the first line chart that the percentage of
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household
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households
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 with electrical appliances increased over the period.
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, the weekly
hours
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 of housework experienced a decrease. In 1920, around 1% of
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household
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households
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 used
refrigerator
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 and the percentage increased rapidly to approximately 50%
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 1940. In 1940 it experienced another increase and reached around 90%. From 1980, around 100% of
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household
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households
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 utilized
refrigerator
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. Meanwhile, in 1920, roughly 30% of
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household
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households
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 used vacuum
cleaner
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, and it
also
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 increased rapidly by around 100% in 2000. From 2000, 100% of households used vacuum
cleaner
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. In terms of washing
machine
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machines
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, in 1920, roughly 40% of
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household
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households
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 used washing
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machines
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, and it rose to around 70% in 1950
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 and slightly declined to approximately 63% in 1980.
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, it rose to above 70% in 2019. In terms of the
hour
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 of housework, in 1920, approximately 50
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 of work
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 done per
week
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, and in 1960, it declined steadily and reached
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around 25
hours
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 per
week
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.
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, it again decreased to around 10
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 per
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, week, household with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
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