The chart below shows percentages of males and females working for different duration(hours) per week in Australia in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of Australian
men
and Use synonyms
women
participating in regular physical activity. Use synonyms
Overall
, across all Linking Words
age
groups, Use synonyms
women
were consistently more active than Use synonyms
men
, except for the 15-24 Use synonyms
age
range, Use synonyms
whereas
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men
were slightly more active.
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To begin
with, for Linking Words
women
, at the Use synonyms
age
of 15-24, 47.7% participated in regular physical activity, slightly lower when compared to their male counterparts. Use synonyms
However
, in the next Linking Words
age
group, the Use synonyms
participation
rate increased to 48.9%, surpassing the percentage of Use synonyms
men
in Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
age
group. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the female proportion reached its highest point of Linking Words
participation
in the 45-54 category, with 53.3%.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
men
aged 15-24 had a high Use synonyms
participation
rate of 52.8%, significantly outperforming Use synonyms
women
. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, in the 25-34 category, male Linking Words
participation
decreased to 42.2%, falling behind Use synonyms
women
in Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
age
group. Use synonyms
Moreover
, male Linking Words
participation
dropped to its lowest level (39.5%) in the 35-44 category. Use synonyms
Subsequently
, an improvement was observed, with the latest figure showing 46.7% of Linking Words
men
aged 65 and over engaging in regular physical activity.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, age, participation with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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