The graph below shows the percentage of people who travelled by bus in the UK from 2009 to 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table below illustrates the proportions of citizens who used the
bus
for travelling in the UK between 2009 and 2011. In general, Using Use synonyms
Use synonyms
bus
for shopping and visiting friends Correct article usage
the bus
were
the Correct subject-verb agreement
was
higest
Correct your spelling
highest
percentages
among other categories. Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
Whereas
, Linking Words
less
people used Change the quantifier
fewer
Use synonyms
bus
for Correct article usage
the bus
working
in all three years.
Replace the word
work
To begin
with, The Linking Words
number
of public who use Use synonyms
Use synonyms
bus
for shopping was 65 per Add an article
the bus
a bus
cent
in 2009. Use synonyms
Then
the figure decreased slightly in the next two years and reached 51% in 2011. Linking Words
Moreover
, the Linking Words
number
of populations who Use synonyms
using
Wrong verb form
use
Use synonyms
bus
for visiting friends stood at 19 per Add an article
the bus
a bus
cent
in 2009 and 2010. Use synonyms
Then
the Linking Words
number
grew suddenly to 23% by 2011.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Linking Words
There
are only 4% of folk went to study by Fix capitalization
there
bus
in 2009. The figure remained unchanged in 2010 and 2011 with 9%. Use synonyms
While
people who used Linking Words
Use synonyms
bus
for working was just 5 per Correct article usage
the bus
cent
in 2009. In 2010, the Use synonyms
percentages
declined slowly to 2%. In 2011, nobody used Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
Use synonyms
bus
for work. Correct article usage
the bus
In addition
, Using Linking Words
Use synonyms
bus
for Correct article usage
the bus
day
tour was only 7% Correct article usage
a day
in
the beginning of the period. Change the preposition
at
Then
Linking Words
rising
slowly to 12 per Wrong verb form
rose
cent
in 2010 and the Use synonyms
number
remained Use synonyms
same
in 2011.Correct article usage
the same
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bus, number, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slowly" was used 2 times.
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