Some people say that the fast food industry has made a negative effect on health, the environment, and family eating habits. Do you agree or disagree?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

There is no denying the fact that fast

food

Use synonyms

plays a huge part in many

peopl's

Correct your spelling

people's

peoples

lives.

While

Linking Words

it is a commonly held belief that fast neutration has harmed

individuals

Change noun form

individuals'

individual's

show examples

well-being, climate and family eating habits, there is

also

Linking Words

arguments

Change the noun form

argument

show examples

opposes

Wrong verb form

opposing

show examples

it. In my opinion, I consider that fast

food

Use synonyms

had

Wrong verb form

has

show examples

a negative impact on various aspects

Change preposition

show examples

the

socity

Correct your spelling

society

To begin

Linking Words

with, family eating had affected by fast

food

Use synonyms

, families

actullay

Correct your spelling

actually

became rare to meet

Change preposition

for

show examples

one

coocked

Correct your spelling

cooked

meal,

while

Linking Words

each family member has his

food

Use synonyms

from any

resturants

Correct your spelling

restaurants

restaurant

In other words

Linking Words

restuarants

Correct your spelling

restaurants

such

Linking Words

as KFC and MAC demonstrated family

members

Change noun form

members'

member's

show examples

eating habits.

In addition

Linking Words

, to

over eating

Correct your spelling

overeating

show examples

these bad

Use synonyms

Fix the agreement mistake

foods

show examples

food

Add a comma

food,

show examples

many chronic diseases

has

Correct subject-verb agreement

have

show examples

shown

Linking Words

last

Change the article

the last

show examples

dacade

Correct your spelling

decade

For instance

Linking Words

, Obesity and Cancer have

been

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

dramatically climbed by 70% in

Linking Words

last

Correct article usage

the last

show examples

ten years. Another point to consider, fast

food

Use synonyms

badly

affected

Wrong verb form

affects

show examples

the environment. It is

also

Linking Words

possible to say because of the high rate of plastic that many fast

food

Use synonyms

industries use the

waist

Correct your spelling

waste

show examples

mentals

Correct your spelling

metals

rose, which increased the pollution.

Furthermore

Linking Words

, many animals

had

Wrong verb form

have

show examples

been killed either from

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

pollution or industrial use by

resturants

Correct your spelling

restaurants

For example

Linking Words

recent

Add an article

a recent

show examples

study by the University of Prince Sultan has shown that the Saudi Ship has been reduced

Change preposition

by 18

show examples

due to

Linking Words

air pollution,

while

Linking Words

the Saudi ship was responsible for clearing about 33% of

atmosphere

Add an article

the atmosphere

show examples

. In conclusion, despite all

different

Correct article usage

the different

show examples

view

Fix the agreement mistake

views

show examples

, I tend to believe that

quickly

Change the word

quick

show examples

nuetration

Correct your spelling

penetration

harmed

Wrong verb form

harms

show examples

people in various things like health, global warming and family eating

hapits

Correct your spelling

habits

. My suggestion for individuals is to reduce eating fast

food

Use synonyms

for

it's

Replace the word

its

show examples

danguerses

Correct your spelling

dangers

abdallah550603Tue Dec 24 2024

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Task Response

Your response addresses the essay topic, however, it could be more focused. Ensure each paragraph clearly communicates one main point related to the topic and supports it with coherent examples.

Coherence and Cohesion

Work on sentence structure and logical sequencing. Ideas should flow naturally, with clear connections between sentences and paragraphs to enhance coherence.

Coherence and Cohesion

Your essay includes an introduction and conclusion, which frame your argument well.

Task Response

You provided specific examples to support your opinions, which strengthens task achievement.

11
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
38
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

263 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

Obesity epidemic
Non-communicable diseases
Saturated fats
Disposable packaging
Carbon footprint
Convenience food
Nutritional value
Eating patterns
Socioeconomic disparities
Affordable meals

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7
band
Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
According to some people’s mindset, for a happy childhood, kids should possess as many toys as possible. While such a way of thinking has some benefits, there are several drawbacks. This essay will examine the benefits and drawbacks of this phenomenon.
7.5
band
Some people think that shops should not be allowed to sell food or drink that has been scientifically proved to be bad for people's health. Do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that shopkeepers should not promote food products which are scientifically justified to cause significant negative impacts on human health. This essay completely agrees with this statement because it leads to unhealthy lifestyles and affects people with dreadful diseases such as obesity and high blood pressure. This essay will discuss the same and my opinion in detail with relevant examples.
8.5
band
You stayed at a hotel to attend a company meeting and you were dissatisfied with your stay. Write a letter to the meeting organiser. In your letter – Provide the details of your meeting – Explain what you were dissatisfied with – Suggest what the hotel should do to resolve the issue.
I am writing this letter to express my acute dissatisfaction with my recent stay at your Hotel Ramada Encore 19, Brisbane.
7.5
band
In the modern world, the image is becoming a more powerful way of communication than the written word To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Today, one of the most popular methods to communicate effectively is through image. It is believed by many people that it is more powerful than a written word. However, I disagree with the statement and believe that without words, such as description, the image alone may lead to misunderstanding.
6.5
band
information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace. Do the benefits of this mobility outweighs the disadvantages? Give reasonsfor yours answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
The recent experience has raised a new work ethic known as working from home. Despite some of the drawbacks, I firmly believe that the benefits outweigh the disadvantages. This essay will explore the benefits and drawbacks of working on mobility with reasoned examples.

Some people say that the fast food industry has made a negative effect on health, the environment, and family eating habits. Do you agree or disagree?

Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

Some people think that shops should not be allowed to sell food or drink that has been scientifically proved to be bad for people's health. Do you agree or disagree?

You stayed at a hotel to attend a company meeting and you were dissatisfied with your stay. Write a letter to the meeting organiser. In your letter – Provide the details of your meeting – Explain what you were dissatisfied with – Suggest what the hotel should do to resolve the issue.

In the modern world, the image is becoming a more powerful way of communication than the written word To what extent do you agree or disagree?

information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace. Do the benefits of this mobility outweighs the disadvantages? Give reasonsfor yours answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience