The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.

The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the

population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and

2010.
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The chart illustrates how many
people
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a
computer
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ownership from 2002 to 2010 and the percentage of
education
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grades (no high
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diploma, high
school
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graduate, college, bachelor's degree, postgraduate qualification) in 2002 and 2010.
Overall
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, the majority of
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as
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owner
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computers in 2010
as well as
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the most
computer
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ownership by
education
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level in 2010.
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, in
education
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level, no high
school
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diploma is the lowest in 2002 and 2010,
while
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the highest
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ownership in 2010 is
people
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with postgraduate qualifications. The proportion of
people
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as a technology owner started at less than 60 per cent and constantly grew until reached a peak in 2010 of almost 80 per cent.
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, the number of
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owners in
education
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categories in 2002 was around 18%, around 38% of high
school
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graduates, around 51% in college (incomplete), bachelor's degree around 70%, and the highest in postgraduate level more than 70%.
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no graduate
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high
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around 40%, in high
school
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almost 70%, in college around more than 80%, in bachelor's degrees almost 90%, and
people
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with qualifications of postgraduate more than 90%
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, computer, education, school with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend analysis
  • population demographics
  • educational attainment
  • disparities
  • technological advancement
  • digital divide
  • market penetration
  • socio-economic factors
  • predictive insights
  • statistical significance
  • longitudinal study
  • accessibility
  • affordability
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