The graph below shows information about the kinds of food that teenagers in Australia enjoyed eating. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph showcases the data
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more teens in Australia over the two decades (1975-2000). Wrong verb form
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Overall
, there areLinking Words
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at least, three kinds of food Remove the comma
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such
as pizza, fish and chips, and Linking Words
hamburgers
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which respectively revealed interesting Change preposition
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trend years
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trends year
years
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In the first stage, Pizza was not famous enough as a meal in 1975 with under 20 times eaten, yet it continuously increased and eventually became the most chosen menu in 2000. The same trend, with a little distinction, belongs to Fix the agreement mistake
year
hamburgers
which was lower than other types at the beginning. Use synonyms
Hamburgers
, Use synonyms
however
, grew up gradually Linking Words
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and then
the
second place Correct article usage
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at the end
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In contrast
, the category of fish and chips decreased Linking Words
initially
and moved forward a little Linking Words
up
around 1980-1985, Change preposition
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then
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finally
shrank back Linking Words
untill
the Correct your spelling
until
last
years.
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while
pizza and Linking Words
hamburgers
simultaneously increased, fish and chips showed the other way.Use synonyms
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