The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph illustrates the details of quantities of

good

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goods

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transported in the United Kingdom from 1974 until 2002, for different types

for transporting

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of transport

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including Road, Water, Rail and pipelines. The units used in measured in million tonnes.

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m it’s clear from the line charts that, people who had used the road

in

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for

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moving were the most across the

years

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,

alternatively

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alternatively,

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the other ways were the least.

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what shown, the majority were preferred to

moving

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move

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by

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on

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walk were fluctuate in

initial

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the initial

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years

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till 1990 followed by

steady

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a steady

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amount

account

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accounting

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for 80 million tonnes,

then

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significantly

increase

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increased

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to make be nearly 100

Milione

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Million

tones

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tonnes

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. In terms of other kinds of transport, water and rail

were

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have been

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similar since 1957, surprisingly after five

years

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,they had separated, the Water had a rapid increase across the

years

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represent constantly 40,

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in 2000 rose to 80%.

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Conversely

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the rail had declined over the

years

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to

returned

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in 2000 made up 40%.

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Moreover

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the pipeline had a significant change which

start

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started

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form

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from

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less than 1 million

tone

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tones

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be

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apply

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20 in 2000.