Nowadays there are more opportunities for women than there were in the past. Some people think this situation has caused more problems than it has solved. What are your opinions on this?

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women can have more chances than in the past, some people argue that more issues have been brought about by

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is the flexibility it offers, which is beneficial for women to pursue their ideal paths and careers.

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, in the past

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Japan, it was mandatory to be a full-time houseworker for women.

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, men had to support their families financially, which means that gender roles existed in society;

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, some people have not been able to pursue individuals' desired goals.

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has provided extensive options to certain demographics.

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, one disadvantage of

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phenomenon is

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population since couples have been less likely to choose not to give

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, but rather, they have prioritized their ideal paths, leading to a decrease

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tax revenue. Namely,

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have to provide public services with

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budget, which is a detrimental

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for both

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citizens.

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is because the more time passes, the more financial burdens citizens will be placed to maintain the present services,

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as healthcare and infrastructure, unless

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tackle

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issue seriously, like establishing regulations to improve the

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rate. In conclusion, there are pros and cons of

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social transformation. In my opinion,

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transformation is a positive

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since both

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and male are allowed to

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receive

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for their lives.

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,

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must regard a shrinking population as a pressing issue and tackle it as soon as possible.