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The graph below shows the three different kinds of emission sources (oil / coal / gas) of greenhouse gas in the UK. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the three different kinds of emission sources (oil / coal / gas) of greenhouse gas in the UK. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar diagram compares data about how much toxic
gas
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 per million tons was emitted from 3 various fossil fuel resources in the UK from 1990 to 2010.
Overall
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, it was important that the rate of emission from all sources other than
gas
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 was reduced over the period of 2 decades.
According to
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 the chart, in the beginning, Coal, the main source that generated a great deal of greenhouse
gas
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 in 1990, hit just over 300;
then
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 it went down moderately to just under 200 in 2010.
In addition
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, Oil, the second one, reached nearly 270 in 1990;
thereafter
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, it dipped somewhat to roughly 240 in 1995;
however
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, it rose slightly and touched approximately 260 in 2000. Later it dropped fractionally and recorded almost 210 in 2010. The graph demonstrates that the fashion of
Gas
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 was
in contrast
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 to the others on account of the fact that it reported almost 220 at the start;
then
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 it leapt marginally and reported the highest point among others in 2010, at almost 320.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words gas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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