The graph below shows the three different kinds of emission sources (oil / coal / gas) of greenhouse gas in the UK. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the three different kinds of emission sources (oil / coal / gas) of greenhouse gas in the UK. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart compares data about the carbon per million tonnes emitted from fossil fuels in the UK from 1990 to 2010.
Overall
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, it was important that the trends of all resources other than Gass were reduced over the period of 2 decades.
According to
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the diagram, Coal, which was the main source that emitted toxic gases in 1990, hit just over 300 in the beginning;
thereafter
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, it declined significantly to just under 200 in 2010. Oil, the second one in 1990, reached roughly 270 in 1990 after that, it fell to nearly 240 in 1995.
However
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, it rose slightly to approximately 260 in 2000;
nevertheless
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, it decreased moderately to almost 210 in 2010. The graph demonstrates that Gass fashion was
in contrast
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to the Coal and Oil owing to the fact that Gass touched almost 220 at the start;
then
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it climbed marginally;
Finally
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, it recorded almost 320 in 2010.
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