The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

The pie charts exhibit the total average of

energy

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and emissions from greenhouse gases in Australia.

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, it can be seen that heating is the most commonly

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energy

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in Australia, followed by

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heating. Meanwhile, few households use

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to cool.

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, the emissions of carbon dioxide mostly come from

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heating

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and other appliances. Most of the household in Australia uses

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for heating with 42%,

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30%

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for

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heating. Other household appliances

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15% of electricity,

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only 2%

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cooling . Looking at the result of carbon dioxide,

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heater emits 32% of gas,

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other appliances release 28%.

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, the effect of gas emission

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the refrigerator

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refrigerator

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is double

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the

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consume

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with 14% in total.