The maps below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map illustrates how the university sports centre is now, and how is expected to be after modifications.

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, is appreciated that every building will be inside of the main wall and much more organized,

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many new areas will be added in order to increase the variety of activities.

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, is noticeable that the outdoor courts situated on both sides of the main building will be replaced by several different areas that include a leisure pool on the left with its changing room located just below it. In order to access

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area is need to pass next to the sports shop which is on the left of the principal entrance. On the right side, a cafe will be opened next to the third changing room, in front of them a sports hall will be placed.

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, two dance studios will be built next to the gym which will be expanded.

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the pool located in the middle will keep its changing room and seating area.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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