The maps below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map illustrates how the university sports centre is now, and how is expected to be after modifications.

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, is appreciated that every building will be inside of the main wall and much more organized,

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many new areas will be added in order to increase the variety of activities.

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, is noticeable that the outdoor courts situated on both sides of the main building will be replaced by several different areas that include a leisure pool on the left with its changing room located just below it. In order to access

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area is need to pass next to the sports shop which is on the left of the principal entrance. On the right side, a cafe will be opened next to the third changing room, in front of them a sports hall will be placed.

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, two dance studios will be built next to the gym which will be expanded.

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the pool located in the middle will keep its changing room and seating area.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

167 words

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