Two charts below show the percentage of qualified graduates in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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providing data about students who graduated in a nation between the years 1980 and 2008. To start with, in 1980, those who had their

intial

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degree in Arts were about 25% and they doubled

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in 2008

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graduates which were at 11%.

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PHD

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PhD

Science

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increased

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approximately seventeen per cent in a period

two

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of two

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decades, whilst, PhD Arts

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also

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accelerated

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5%.

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, in 2008, decreased from 19 per cent up to 10, which means people

where

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not much interested in Sciences degree.

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can be

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explained

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those who studied

Masters

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Science remained at 29 for about twenty years. Masters Arts only increased

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1% in the whole period.

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, with these two pie charts, there was a great change and comparison for the graduates

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those who did PhD Science.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

140 words

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