The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustration gives information about the process by which building bricks are produced. In general, clay is mixed with sand and water and
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goes through a series of processes, from drying to heating and cooling before getting packaged, after which it would be ready to be sent out. The process starts with a digger extracting clay from the ground, that clay is later put on a metal grid which is used to transfer it to a roller. Sand and water get added to create a mixture that either goes through a wire cutter to form
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into shape or gets filled into moulds. The brick-shaped mixtures go to a drying oven where they stay for 24-48 hours before undergoing two rounds of heating at moderate (200-980°C) and high (870-1300°C) temperatures. The bricks later stay
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a cooling chamber for 48-72 hours before being ready to get packaged and delivered.

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  • manufacturing process
  • extraction
  • raw material
  • digger
  • metal grid
  • debris
  • molded
  • wire cutter
  • drying ovens
  • firing process
  • kiln
  • cooling chamber
  • delivery
  • construction sites
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