The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.)

Information regarding the origins of harmful

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emissions in the UK between 1990

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2005.

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, it can be seen that the trends of total

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pollutants

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were downward over the period and the highest source of

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pollutants

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was from industry. Looking first at the industry’s figure, it started at approximately 5.5

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in 1990 which was the highest.

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there was a considerable drop to 3

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in 1996 and after

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the

air

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pollutants

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from industry experienced a slight decrease by 1 to 2

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tonnes

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at the end

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of

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. Moving to the

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pollutants

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of households and transport, they began at the same number which was around 1

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million

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in 1990.

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the figure

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transport remained stable over the period, there was a fluctuation

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between 1993 and 2002.

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, it decreased slightly and finished at just above 0

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tonnes

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in 2005.