The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.)

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.)
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.)
The graphs
illustrates
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how each source of air
pollutions
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pollution
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in the UK changed from
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period
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the period
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of 1990 to 2005. From the measurements,
it is clear that
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industry
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the industry
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sector took
majority
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the majority
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portion to the total air
polltants
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pollutants
but
was decreasing
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for
entire
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the entire
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period
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, followed by
transportation
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the transportation
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and
households
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sectors respectively. From 1990 onwards, the industry had decreased from about 7
million
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tonnes
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and significantly dropped to around 3
million
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tones
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in the
period
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of 1993 to 1996. After 1996. Industry figures were converging to around 2
million
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tonnes
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, which was quite similar to
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the households
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households
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household
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sector
that
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was slightly decreasing toward zero
million
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tonnes
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. Those two were different from the transport sector, which had about a constant 1
million
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tonnes
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among
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the
period
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and showed little fluctuation
overall
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. In general, The UK was steadily reducing the amount of total air pollutants throughout the given
period
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, for a span of fifteen consecutive years.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words period, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • air pollutants
  • emissions
  • decrease
  • increase
  • stable
  • fluctuate
  • trend
  • peak
  • drop
  • significant
  • legislation
  • technological advancements
  • comparative analysis
  • contributors
  • households
  • transport
  • industry
  • regulation
  • pattern
  • anomaly
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