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29 DEC---The charts below show the protein and calorie intakes of people in different parts of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

29 DEC---The charts below show the protein and calorie intakes of people in different parts of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts depict the average consumption of
protein
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 and calorie
intake
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 in four different areas of the world.
Overall
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, North
America
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 recorded the highest average
intake
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 of both animal and other
protein
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, significantly surpassing other continents, and
this
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 was in line with its position as the leader in average calorie consumption. Looking in more detail,
although
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 animal
protein
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 was the most consumed source of
protein
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 in three continents, India relied more on other
protein
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 sources, with an
intake
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 of 15 units compared to 13 units for animal
protein
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.
This
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 15-unit figure was the same as East
Africa
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's
intake
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 of other proteins,
while
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 animal
protein
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 consumption in East
Africa
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 was slightly higher at 16.
On the other hand
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, North
America
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 recorded 62 of animal-based
protein
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, representing a significant portion. Latin
America
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 followed at half that amount. As for calorie
intake
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, North
America
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 consistently led with an average of around 35000 calories, trailed by Latin
America
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 at nearly 3000.
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, East
Africa
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 and India exhibited a narrow gap, with East
Africa
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 marginally higher at 2200 compared to India's 2000 calories.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words protein, intake, america, africa with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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