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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, an make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, an make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the changes in the floor plan of a public
library
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 in 20
years
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. The image of a central
library
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 20
years
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 ago shows that there were 3 rooms, which are a reading
room
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 with newspapers and magazines at the left
corner
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 near the entrance, a CDs, videos and
computer
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 games
room
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 at the left upper
corner
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, and a children’s
books
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room
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 at the right upper
corner
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. There is an enquiry desk at the right
corner
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 near the entrance. Tables and chairs are located in the middle of the
library
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. Adult fiction
books
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 are located between a reading
room
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 and CDs, videos
computer
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 games
room
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 and on the opposite side, adult non-fiction
books
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 are displayed. 20
years
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 later, the current
library
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 has changed drastically. An enquiry desk changed into a café. Some sofas are installed in a former CDs, videos and
computer
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 games
room
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 and changed into a children’s fiction
books
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room
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. The former children’s
books
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room
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 took place into a lecture
room
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 and a reading
room
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 turned into a
computer
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room
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. Some self-service machines are installed near the information desk and there people can find adult fiction
books
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.
Overall
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, there are significant changes
of
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in
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 a public
library
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 in 20
years
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. The current
library
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 has more
comfort
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comfortable
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 equipment
such
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 as a café and sofas.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, years, room, corner, computer, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 5 times.
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