The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the
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contribution
from eight different sources for Turkey's economy in Use synonyms
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different years( 2000 and 2016).
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it is clear that
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agriculture
sector had the highest Correct article usage
the agriculture
contribution
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in 2016, it was healthcare and education. Linking Words
In contrast
, construction had the least Linking Words
contribution
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whereas
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2016, it was finance, business and others.
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contribution
decreased from almost a quarter (25% in 2000 to 14% in 2016.
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goverment
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government
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and leisure and hospitality went down by a mere 3 % respectively.
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On the other hand
, in the case of construction, it increased from 3% in the first Linking Words
year
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exactly
year
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, the finance and business improved from 5% in 2000 to 8% in 2016. As for Linking Words
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manufacturing plunged from 8% in the first Correct article usage
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year
to12% in the second Use synonyms
year
. Turning to the trade, utilities and Use synonyms
transportatoin
surged from 14% in 2000 to 16% in 2016. When it Correct your spelling
transportation
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the healthcare
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healthcare
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constant
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constant
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