The diagram below shows the proposed changes to an office building. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The illustration provides a blueprint of an office building
along with
a future imagination proposing certain changes.
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Overall
, the new blueprint proposes that the Linking Words
area
of the Use synonyms
offices
should be increased. Use synonyms
In addition
, the two grass areas along each side should be converted into an outdoor seating Linking Words
area
and a meeting Use synonyms
area
.
In the old blueprint, we can find that all Use synonyms
offices
were lined up next to each other on the Use synonyms
left hand
side of the main entrance. Opposite Add a hyphen
left-hand
to
the Change preposition
apply
offices
a kitchen, a canteen, and a Use synonyms
storeroom
can be found. Use synonyms
Additionally
, a bathroom was built near the Linking Words
storeroom
.
When reporting on the proposed changes, we can find that the kitchen and the canteen that were present previously are to be replaced with Use synonyms
offices
. The main entrance is planned to be moved in between the re-innovated Use synonyms
offices
. Use synonyms
In addition
, the grass Linking Words
area
on the right-hand side is to be built completely into a new meeting Use synonyms
area
Use synonyms
along with
moving the bathroom that was previously near the Linking Words
storeroom
to there as well. The grass Use synonyms
area
on the left was turned into an outdoor seating Use synonyms
area
, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
storeroom
exhibited no changes.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, offices, storeroom with synonyms.
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