The diagram below shows the proposed changes to an office building. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The diagram below shows the proposed changes to an office building. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The illustration provides a blueprint of an office building
along with
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a future imagination proposing certain changes.
Overall
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, the new blueprint proposes that the
area
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of the
offices
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should be increased.
In addition
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, the two grass areas along each side should be converted into an outdoor seating
area
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and a meeting
area
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. In the old blueprint, we can find that all
offices
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were lined up next to each other on the
left hand
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side of the main entrance. Opposite
to
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the
offices
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a kitchen, a canteen, and a
storeroom
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can be found.
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, a bathroom was built near the
storeroom
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. When reporting on the proposed changes, we can find that the kitchen and the canteen that were present previously are to be replaced with
offices
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. The main entrance is planned to be moved in between the re-innovated
offices
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.
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, the grass
area
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on the right-hand side is to be built completely into a new meeting
area
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along with
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moving the bathroom that was previously near the
storeroom
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to there as well. The grass
area
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on the left was turned into an outdoor seating
area
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,
while
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the
storeroom
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exhibited no changes.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "along with, in addition".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, offices, storeroom with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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