the maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

The maps provide information about the heart of Islip, a small

town

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projection in the future. In general, it is predicted that the

town

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center

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will

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radical changes, especially in the north of the

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.

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a wide range of facilities are forecasted to

erected

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and

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old ones, there will be some removal in the

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. It can be seen that, currently, the main road in the

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center

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goes through it and only have 1 turn to the right, leading to the housing area.

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, there will be some changes where in the middle, it will only

available

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for pedestrians,

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road will be constructed in the north, making it a Dual carriageway, covering the whole

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.

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, the countryside and shops in the north are expected to be replaced by three new places relatively from the left to the right, Bus station, Shopping

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and Car park. Noticeably, in the

north west

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corner, a small path will lead to a new housing area

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going to be built in the future.

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the plan, the second

shops

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area in the south,

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school

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the school

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, which

located

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outside the carriageway far

on

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the

south west

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,

remain

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unchanged.

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the park and the two housing areas on the right-hand side of the

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center

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are still existed

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, they are expected to have minor adjustments in the future. To specify, the housing areas will be re-located, one on the inside the carriageway is going to be moved to the left corner

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the other

slightly

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moved to the right.

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, the park is becoming smaller in size, in order to create enough space for the appearance of another new housing property.