The diagram below showthe coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps provide key information about the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. There are a lot of variations but one of the most significant was adding a golf course.

Overall

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, it is clear from the

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that in 1980, there were miserable locations for different places ,

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as the East Bank.

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, there was a woodland and hotel for visitors

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holiday cottages.

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what is shown, in 2010, they were adding a lot of places and building new things. East Bank remained the same place and for holiday cottage was moved to the right of the

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, they added another hotel in the middle of the

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and a boat club for visitors to take around the village.

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, the new place was a golf course in the far south of the

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. Eventually, they

were adding

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a lot of modifications to make the village more appealing and comfortable.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words map with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 5 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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3 paragraphs

159 words

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