The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in English and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in English and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the proportion of both owned and rented accommodation in households in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
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, we can see clearly that the lowest percentage of owned
family
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families
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was 22% in 1918
whereas
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the rented
household
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households
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had the highest number
of
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78%.
Then
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the
people
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number of people
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who
buy
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bought
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the
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house went up from 22% to 69% in 83
years
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, which was followed by a rapid decrease over the next 10
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. Contrary to that, the rented accommodation is totally inverted to the owned ones. It was at its peak at the beginning of the period and the number dropped from 78% to 31%,
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climbed up to 36% until 2011.
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, the difference between the two living accommodation types was the largest at the start of the whole observation, about 56%. After 53
years
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of economic development, these two
percentage
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percentages
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became equal at respectively 50%. In the following 10
years
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, the house owner continued to increase until reached
28
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a 28
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% surplus.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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