Students should be completely free to choose whether to study or play games. They should be allowed to manage their own time. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.
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essay will argue both sides and provide my perspective.
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For instance
, many parents struggle with their children and tell them to avoid playing PlayStation because they do not know who playing with them. Linking Words
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, children have no experience in their lives which means they do not know where the best way for their future. To illustrate, if Linking Words
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on social media do have not any university degrees and they are followed by many young boys which impacts their choices and behaviour.
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if student choose and lose their Linking Words
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task achievement
While you introduce both sides of the argument, ensure to have a clear position in your thesis statement and throughout your essay. This clarity will help in achieving a higher score for a complete task response.
task achievement
Some of your ideas seem general, like the mention of dangerous people. Try to provide more specific examples that clearly illustrate the point you are trying to make.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear main idea and stick to it, avoiding digression. This will make your argument more coherent.
coherence cohesion
Your essay has a clear introduction and conclusion which ensures that the reader understands your stance and summary.
task achievement
Good attempt at discussing both sides of the argument in the introduction.