The bar chart below shows the results of a survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on two groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 and those aged 45-60, and shows factors affecting their work performance.
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The bar chart presents the results of a questionnaire conducted by the human resource department on two age groups 1-30 and 45-60 based on some affecting factors on their performance at a large
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, what stands out from the graph is that the chance for personal development , a relaxed working environment and promotion prospects are the Linking Words
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In terms of the younger employees, approximately 90% were impacted by personal development opportunities which makes it the most effective factor followed by the comfortable working environment which affects around 80% of Fix the agreement mistake
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