If all workers in a company were paid exact same wage regardless of job role there would be much more harmony and cooperation between staff. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
If all employees in a firm were paid
same
salary regardless of work position there would be much more harmony and collaboration between Change the article
the same
workforce
. Correct article usage
the workforce
However
, Linking Words
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this
payment systems will lead to Correct determiner usage
these
unsatisfaction
in workplaces and provide unfair wages. Replace the word
dissatisfaction
This
essay will discuss Linking Words
negative
sides of Correct article usage
the negative
this
opinion.
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Firstly
, there are significant job roles in Linking Words
company
which Add an article
the company
required
specific skills and Wrong verb form
require
educations
. Fix the agreement mistake
education
For instance
, these requirements belong university degree. Linking Words
On the other hand
, doing some special Linking Words
works
is necessary Fix the agreement mistake
work
some
certificates and courses. Change preposition
for some
According to
these requirements, many people spend their Linking Words
times
in Fix the agreement mistake
time
unversities
and Correct your spelling
universities
trainings
. But, these demands are not essential for Change the wording
training
pieces of training
techinical
jobs Correct your spelling
technical
such
as receptionist and many people can do the Linking Words
works
. Fix the agreement mistake
work
This
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realty
must be Correct your spelling
reality
realize
fairly and the best way for it is Wrong verb form
realised
wage
discrepancy.
Fix the infinitive
to wage
Thus
, there are many Linking Words
diffirences
in job duties. Some positions have several high duties and they impact Correct your spelling
differences
on
companies, Change preposition
apply
for
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example
directors’ decisions determine Add a comma
example,
strategies
and directions of companies. Correct article usage
the strategies
Additionally
, some workers play Linking Words
vital
role and provide many benefits for firms. Their activity effect significantly status and incomes of businesses. Add an article
a vital
A
Research Correct article usage
apply
was
concluded by Berlin University demonstrated there are 3 professions that legal entity depends on: lawyer, tax specialist and management. Unnecessary verb
apply
It is clear that
some jobs have vital importance and high wages must provide for them.
In conclusion, Linking Words
Exact
Change the word
Exactly
same
wage regardless of job role will lead to Correct article usage
the same
lack
of motivation and conflicts at Correct article usage
a lack
workplace
. Employees may consider Add an article
the workplace
this
payment method unfairly and Linking Words
this
system can cause feeling unvalued.Linking Words
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear main idea and that every supporting point directly relates to it. This helps enhance the overall logical structure of your essay.
task achievement
While you have addressed both sides of the topic, try to balance the arguments or provide stronger support for the perspective you eventually take.
task achievement
Work on expressing your ideas more clearly and succinctly. Sometimes using simpler language helps convey your argument more effectively.
task achievement
The essay effectively discusses the potential consequences of a uniform wage system on employee motivation and fairness, which is relevant to the task.
coherence cohesion
Conclusion provides a clear summary of the essay's argument, reinforcing the main points discussed.
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