You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your latter •Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months •Say how your work could be done while you are away •Ask for his/her help in arranging it

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DEAR MANAGER, I HOPE

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LETTER

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YOU WELL,I AM POOJA A PRACTICING LAWYER RESIDING AT ANNA NAGAR WEST,THIRUMANGALAM,CHENNAI WHICH IS

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PROMINENT AND I

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THERE FOR SEVERAL YEARS. I AM FORMALLY

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WRITING

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TO REQUEST YOU TO HELP ME TO WORK IN THE

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COMPANY HEAD OFFICE

COMPANYS

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HEADOFFICE

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HEAD OFFICE

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FOR SIX MONTHS, SO THAT I CAN GIVE MY BEST TO THE TEAM,

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,I HAVE BEEN UPDATED WITH NEW

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WHICH WILL BE USEFUL FOR THE PROJECT AND

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THE TEAM,

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, I CAN HANDLE TECHNICAL ISSUES

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INTERNAL ISSUES THROUGH EMAIL AND I AM CAPABLE OF HANDLING A TEAM ,SO MY KNOWLEDGE WOULD BE A STRONG SUPPORT TO

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COMPANY. I WOULD BE

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GRATEFUL

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OPPORTUNITY IS

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TO ME, I

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BE EAGERLY WAITING

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FOR YOUR

POSITIVE REPLY. THANK YOU YOURS FAITHFULLY R.POOJA

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Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure paragraphs have single, clear ideas by structuring your content more distinctly.

Task Achievement

Provide more details about how your current work responsibilities will be managed while you are away. Consider mentioning specific arrangements or delegating tasks.

Task Achievement

The letter clearly explains the desire to work in the company’s head office and mentions the skills that would be beneficial there.

Coherence and Cohesion

The letter contains a clear greeting and closing, addressing the recipient respectfully.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

131 words

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