Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter suggest how you could help her in her home say why you would like to do this work explain when you will and will not be available
Dear Mrs Barrett,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I am available to help you next summer Linking Words
in
your Change preposition
with
house work
.
AsCorrect your spelling
housework
,
I have my summer Remove the comma
apply
hoildays
I can come over to do some chores. I can do dusting, washing dishes and laundry for you. Correct your spelling
holidays
Also
, I can walk your dog in Linking Words
evening
.
I would like to do Add an article
the evening
this
work for you as I know you are old and live alone so it would make me happy and content if I could help you. Linking Words
Moreover
, in Linking Words
Correct article usage
the summers
summers
I am free and I get bored at home.
Fix the agreement mistake
summer
Lastly
, I want to mention that I will be available from 10am - 5pm on weekdays and 1pm - 5pm on weekends. Linking Words
However
, I can Linking Words
also
do overtime if needed.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Thank you.
Yours faithfully,
Shweta Bhat.Linking Words
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure clear paragraphing by introducing a new paragraph for each main point to enhance readability.
Task Achievement
Use a closing line that may encourage a response, such as asking for further details about the job.
Greeting and Closing
The letter has a clear greeting and closing, creating a polite tone that’s suitable for the context.
Logical Structure
The ideas are logically structured, presenting your availability and tasks you can help with in a clear manner.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite