Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line chart provides key information about the annual expenditures on mobile
phone
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and
residental
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residential
phone
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services by US customers from 2001 to 2010. The units are measured in USD.
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, it is clear from the graph that Cell
phone
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services
sky rocketed
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skyrocketed
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with
with
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apply
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customers
consumeing
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consuming
200 $
anuually
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annually
and gradually increasing over the years to reach the maximum peak
to
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of
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800$,
whereas
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residental
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residential
phone
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services began
with
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at
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700$
then
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witnessed a
flutuated
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fluctuated
decrease throughout the years.
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accuracy
Ensure consistency in spelling, e.g., 'residental' should be 'residential', 'flutuated' should be 'fluctuated', and 'consumeing' should be 'consuming'.
task achievement
Elaborate more on comparisons between the trends of cell phone and residential phone services using specific data points to support the explanation.
coherence
Clarify the description of trends over the years by clearly displaying data fluctuations, e.g., providing more examples of fluctuations in residential services.
task response
The report identifies and summarizes the main trends in the data effectively.
coherence
Overall structure of the report is clear, with an introduction and conclusion.
task achievement
The main features are accurately chosen and compared in the data description.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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