Some countries have legal ages at which people can drink. Other countries believe not having strict laws is a better policy. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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some countries think the

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restriction will make underage people violating and difficult to control. In my view, it will have a negative

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when limiting the

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of drinking. Nowadays, a plethora of countries have an

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restriction for

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, their assessment of the side

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when

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drink

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alcohol

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can't handle the effects of intoxication as adults and the rate of

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broke out

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the child's lack of awareness will , which could lead to a serious crime.

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, young adults don't have there are no harsh laws for

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who commit the worst crimes and most of the problems of teenagers come from a lack of awareness.

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, if the body receives more

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than it can't handle, it will have many negative effects and if grave crimes occur, the

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cannot be punished fairly for the victims.

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, the best solution for

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matter is to limit the

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of

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.

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, some countries have perspective on

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not limit the

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alcohol

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in fact,

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is the biggest

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vulnerability

for young adults who want to try to

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so they will pay for police or people who can sale it for them

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the pub and bar. Subsequence, it can not control

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and it is a reminder of the weakness of the law.

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government

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knows the side

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effect

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effects

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as the crime rate in

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or physical health problems after drinking

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alcohol

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since there was young

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, it is the

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of families to

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and approve

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children

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can

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or not if

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start to

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family it would be safe

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,

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limitation

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teenagers want to try and it leads to cheating by collecting money from

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who want to try to break the rules,

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, they know the side

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effect

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but is the way they choose so it is the family's duty to concern and approve

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trouble.