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The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, *20.., and future predictions for 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, *20.., and future predictions for 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the revenue that Southland's main exports have generated in the
years
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 2000, 20.., and 2025.
Overall
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, the graph
show
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 that
the
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over the
years
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 more holidaymakers have visited the city.
Therefore
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, the income
for
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 tourism has increased
consequently
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.
Furthermore
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, in the year
2000
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2000,
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 the exportation of dairy products
gived
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gave
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 earnings of almost $7,000,000 and in the following
years
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 those numbers increased to their peak point at $10,000,000, but in 2025 decreased to $9,000,000.
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, the export of meat products
were
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 the only one that constantly decreased over the
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, because its sales
sarted
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started
 at $6,000,000 in 2000, and finished at $5,000,000. After taking all the details, we can conclude that the
mayority
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majority
 of the income that the city has generated comes from international tourism and dairy products.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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