The line grath compares the amount of books borrowed in June, July, August and September in 2014 from four rural libraries, and pie chart illustrates percentage of books, by sort, wich were adopted during that time.

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The graph illustrates the number and gender of books that were

berrowed

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borrowed

burrowed

in four

month

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months

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of the year and in four different libraries.

Overall

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, the chart shows the libraries West

eaton

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Eaton

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and Church Mount had a progressive increase in

its

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their

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borrows during the four

month

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months

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Furthermore

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since

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from

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June to

September

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September,

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there was a

dreased

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decreased

decrease

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the number

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books that Rye Slip gave to its

costumers

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customers

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In addition

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, the percentage of barrows that Sutton Wood had variety every month:

300

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was 300

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, in June;

aroun

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around

280, in July; 100, In August; and 300, in September.

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, the percentage of the chosen genders was: 10%, Self-Help; 14%, science; 14%, history; 19%, biography; and 43%, fiction. After taking all the details, we can conclude that

library

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the library

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that had more books

barrowed

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borrowed

was Rye Slip, and the type of gander that the majority of the people

tend

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tended

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to choose was fiction.

samuel.vicuna2003lThu Jan 02 2025

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

146 words

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The line grath compares the amount of books borrowed in June, July, August and September in 2014 from four rural libraries, and pie chart illustrates percentage of books, by sort, wich were adopted during that time.

Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in todays world, subjects like Science and technology are most important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. do you think this positive or negative development?

Some people think that cities are the best places to live. Others prefer to live in rural areas. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.