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The table and pie charts provide key information about the British police expenditure between the years of 2017 and 2018. The table illustrates the sources of money and is measured in the bound currency, while the pie charts represent the money allocation. The units are measured in percentages.

The table and pie charts provide key information about the British police expenditure between the years of 2017 and 2018. The table illustrates the sources of money and is measured in the bound currency, while the pie charts represent the money allocation. The units are measured in percentages.
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The two graphs provide data on the police
budget
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 for the years 2017 and 2018 in one region of Britain and the table illustrates the source of the
money
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 and the pie graph displays the things
money
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 was spent on.
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, most of the
money
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 came from the National Government and all the sources increased in the next year. More
money
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 was distributed on salaries. The National Government was the highest source of
budget
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 in both 2017 and 2018 with 175m and 177m
pounds
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 respectively. The second big cause of
money
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 was Local Taxes with 91m which grew to 107m
pounds
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 in the next year. Other sources of
money
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 remained relatively stable in both years with just 38m
pounds
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. The total police
budget
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 went from 304 to 318 million
pounds
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 in 2018. A large proportion of
money
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 was spent on salaries with nearly three quarters. Significant percentages of
money
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 were spent on building and travel with 17% which remained the same in both years. A third of the
budget
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 was spent on building and transport. Technology was the
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 field in consuming
money
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 with just 14%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words budget, money, m, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "provide" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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