The graph below shows the three different kinds of emission sources (oil / coal / gas) of greenhouse gas in the UK. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart
illusrates
the three emission sources of greenhouse Correct your spelling
illustrates
gas
which are oil, coal and Use synonyms
gas
in the UK from 1990 to 2010.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
gas
was the most Use synonyms
comsumption
source Correct your spelling
consumption
of
individuals but Change preposition
for
intially
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initially
gas
was the minority emission. Over the time period, oil and coal were Use synonyms
the
mostly plateaued .
From 1990 Change the article
apply
gas
can be seen notably increasing it was up to over 250 and Use synonyms
evetually
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eventually
gas
reaching a peak which over 300 million tons. Use synonyms
Other
fuel was oil dropped slightly but Change the wording
Another
1990
and 2000 both years Change preposition
in 1990
were remain
constant Change the verb form
remained
there
usage.
Begging of Replace the word
their
the
1990 coal was the majority consumptions of people which was Correct article usage
apply
approxiamately
over 300 million tons. Correct your spelling
approximately
However
, gradually declined coal usage from 1995. Linking Words
Specially
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Especially
end
of Change preposition
at end
the
2010 it Change the article
apply
was
dropped 180 Unnecessary verb
apply
millions
Fix the agreement mistake
million
of
Change preposition
apply
tones
.Correct your spelling
tonnes
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