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The chart and table below show customer satisfaction levels in the US with airlines and aspects of air travel in 1999,2000 and 2007

The chart and table below show customer satisfaction levels in the US with airlines and aspects of air travel in 1999,2000 and 2007
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The following bar chart gives information about the satisfaction work with the airlines in the US,
while
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 the table shows the percentage of particular aspects with the airlines (divided
in to
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 five categories) in 1999, 2000 and 2007.
Overall
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, the majority of people who were satisfied was high compared to
dissatisfied
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those dissatisfied
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was
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slightly dropped within airlines over the years. The most satisfied
of
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courtesy of flight attendants was rising,
whereas
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 the percentage of
price
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the price
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 of tickets
were
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decreased in all of the years. In 1999, 65%
people
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of people
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who
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were satisfied,
while
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 32% were dissatisfied. The percentage of the bodies who were satisfied
was
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slightly increased to 69% in 2000 compared to
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a gradually
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gradually
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 decrease in
proportion
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the proportion
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who
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of who
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 people were dissatisfied to 29%. By 2007 satisfaction rose even 72%,
whereas
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 dissatisfaction
decline
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declined
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 to 24%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Customer satisfaction
  • Air travel
  • Booking process
  • Luggage services
  • Punctuality
  • In-flight services
  • Customer service
  • Trend analysis
  • Improvement/decline in satisfaction
  • External factors influencing satisfaction
  • Advancements in technology
  • Airline policies
  • Economic factors
  • Customer expectations
  • Impact of technology
  • Competition among airlines
  • Airline practices
  • Regulations
  • Perception and satisfaction
  • Satisfaction levels
  • Safety concerns
  • Punctual flights
  • Booking process efficiency
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