In many urban areas, the rising cost of housing has made it difficult for middle and low-income families to afford a place to live. What are the causes of this issue, and what solutions can you suggest to address it?

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and low-income
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having
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time
to afford
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a place to live in many urban
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since housing
cost
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costs
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rising.
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difficulty and possible solutions to
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problem
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. Since urban
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offer better opportunities
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as schools and jobs, individuals prefer living in urban
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. That makes more demand and it naturally causes expensive housing.
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, housing is getting more and more difficult for
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and low-income
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each and every day.
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, structures in urban
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are newer and better looking and that’s why rent
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higher than
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other
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, there would be a lot of people
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to live in a landmark
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of
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, housing in city centres becomes unaffordable for
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middle income
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families
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, people can address a
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for
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easly
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easily
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, if individuals stop being persistent about living in an urban city and move to a calmer place housing prices would naturally decline.
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, making new houses in the urban
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would cause lower costs. Governments are responsible
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problem
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and
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remedy for
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government’s
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building
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new houses for
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vulnerable
. In conclusion, as urban
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have all the opportunities for living the rent in urban cities
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very
high-priced
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The best solution to
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for
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and low-income
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is
move
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out from the urban
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or
governments
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taking
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the
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responsibilty
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responsibility
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high-price housing
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for low-income
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task achievement
Provide more specific examples and data to strengthen your arguments, such as statistics or case studies on housing prices impacts.
coherence cohesion
Refine the transition sentences to create smoother connections between paragraphs and ideas, enhancing the flow of your essay.
introduction
Your introduction clearly outlines the issues to be discussed, setting a good foundation for your essay.
task achievement
The essay addresses both causes and potential solutions, demonstrating a balanced approach to analyzing the problem.

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