The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart gives information about the percentage of electricity which was produced and used by ten nations of the best in 2014.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that AC was created and consumed highly in China, Linking Words
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in Korea the proportion of service dropped to the lowest point. Units are measured in billions of KWh in the bar chart.
Moving to the production and consumption in China was most countries, Linking Words
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in the United States, the percentage of production was 4,099 more than consumption was 3,866. Linking Words
Moreover
, in Russia were produced and consumed nearly at the same.
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Whereas
, the production of electricity in Japan, India, Canada, France, and Brazil rose more than in consumption. Linking Words
On the other hand
, Germany was the opposite, Linking Words
however
, Korea was in the bottom rank of countries in 2014.Linking Words
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