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The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at leat 150 words.

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The given bar chart illustrates the percentage of
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growth per year in three different countries from 2007 to 2010.
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, it is clearly seen that Japan experienced an upward trend,
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 Tunisia and Ecuador experienced a downward trend. In detail, the percentage of
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growth in Japan started at 2%
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 and increased dramatically to 4% in 2008.
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, the proportion climbed steadily to just over 5%
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 and jumped significantly to 6.5% in the final year. Turning
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the figure for Tunisia started at just above 6%, and decreased rapidly to 4.5% in 2008.After that, the proportion declined gradually to 3%
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 and maintained the same level until 2010. In the case of Ecuador started at 3%, and surged sharply to just under 5%.Afterwards, the figure dropped steeply to 1.2%
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 and escalated
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markedly
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to 2.2% in the period.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • GDP growth rate
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • fluctuations
  • peaks and troughs
  • economic performance
  • comparative analysis
  • stability
  • volatility
  • economic crisis
  • policy changes
  • annual growth
  • main features
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