The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.)

The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.)
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.)
The bar chart illustrates the proportions of
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ownership
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from 2002 to 2010,
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the second bar chart presents the percentage of
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ownership
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by different
level
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levels
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of educational background in 2002 and 2010.
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,
computer
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ownership
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increased steadily over the eight years, rising from about 30% in 2002 to around 60% in 2010.
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represents a doubling in the number of people owning computers during
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period. Looking at the
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by
education
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level,
it is clear that
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those with higher
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consistently had higher
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ownership
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rates in both years. In 2002, only about 15% of people without a high school diploma owned a
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,
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approximately 75% of those with a postgraduate qualification did. By 2010, these figures rose to roughly 40% and 95%, respectively.All
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groups showed significant growth in
computer
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ownership
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over the period. The largest increases were seen among high school graduates and those with an incomplete college
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, with rises of around 30 percentage points each. Despite these gains, the gap in
ownership
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between the lowest and highest
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levels remained substantial.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words computer, ownership, education with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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