The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.)

The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.)
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There are two bar charts, one shows the percentage of computer ownership from 2002 to 2010 by population, and another illustrates the computer ownership by
education
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level
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between 2002 and 2010.
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, the figure had increased from the beginning to the end of
this
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8-year period, and it was totally related to the increase in each
education
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level
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.
In addition
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, the higher the
level
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of
education
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was, the higher the percentage of people who owned computers, in both years presented. The percentage of computer ownership had increased relatively since 2002 and it started in 2002 at just above 50%, before it rose to around 60% in 2004 and around 65% in 2006. 2 years later, it continued to grow to just below 75% and ended at exact 75% in 2010. When compared by
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of
education
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, in 2002,
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no high school diploma and high school graduate were below 50%, which were around 14% and 35% respectively, the other three, college (incomplete), bachelor’s degree and postgraduate qualification, were above half, which
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just above 50%, just below 75% and exact 75% respectively.
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, the percentages of all educational levels increased by around 20% to 25% in 2010.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words education, level with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
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